Why has Western civilization been hostile to finance? Is it justified?

My essay write about T H E ASCEN T OF MONE Y ( answer questions)

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here are the initial questions:

Why has Western civilization been hostile to finance? Is it justified? What is money? What was the key to the Medici’s success? What were the key innovations of banks that created an alternative to the historical basis of value derived from precious metals?

here is link of book

http://www.worldhistory.biz/download567/Ferguson,_Niall_-_The_Ascent_of_Money__A_Financial_History_of_the_World_(Penguin_Press__2008).pdf