Interrelationship Between Personality Traits and Emotional Stability, Well-being, and Happiness

Teachers comment on my paper 1. In the abstract, add a little conclusion / Brief statement  of the main conclusion 2. Change tone a little in the abstract, Ex; In this study…. 3. Make subtopic titles more descriptive  4. Make sure subtopics are supporting multiple articles ( look for common things and differences) 5. Have what multiple authors say about the subtopics 6. Don’t name the article just include in-text citation or references 7. Work on integration of paper and support 8. Have more integration references within the subtopics 9. Check references formating 10. References from the reference list has to be in the body of the paper If my teacher makes any more comments by Sunday I will let you know

Psyc draft paper 1